All Comments on 'Jackson in HRPG-World 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
NICE

And that's putting it mildly.

It's good to see your work again and uploading it on my birthday is an added treat. Thank you very much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Already read the story on your blog. Since I like JRPGs, humourous stories and succubi, I couldn't help but fall in love with the story.

Would be great if the succubus reveals herself to be his second party member after he beats her. (I already wondered where the boring magician girl that falls in love with the hero over the course of the game was.)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nice story so far

Really like what we've seen of this so far. Since Jackson respawns when he di... err, Game-Overs, he could meet a huge number of interesting ends before manyeyedhydra decides to end this one.

One final thought from me - Anyone else think there's a possibility that the succubus might be another Player Character trapped in the game like Jackson? Or maybe an actual Succubus instead something created by the game. The potential here is endless...

HurbsterHurbsteralmost 12 years ago

After the 40 or 50th time he dies tor her maybe he should try flowers or something - you never know....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Always a pleasure

To read your work. Love the idea behind this one, hope you take the time to really explore it. Good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Lol inspiration strikes?

MGQ 2? :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Definitely liked this one. Hoping for a sequel chapter soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Epic

My wife and I loved this one! It was an epic amusement and made for a great parody of all Japanese RPGs. Wonderful story line, and can't wait for the rematch.

Bigbear_2345

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
absolutely fantastic

great

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
awesome

one of your best ones yes cant wait for more,you really do write the best stories on here

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Amazing story!

I love your writing and this story was one of your best! please make another!

biercebierceover 10 years ago
This is a hoot!

Great story. Love the game play idea and plot. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

DID YOU ACTUALLY MAKE A FUCKING MONSTER GIRL QUEST REFERENCE???

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
sorry not what I was expecting

fucking casual gamers all they want is instant gratification make me awasome with little to no effort I think this dick is the guy that said to ea put more pay-to-win content in battlefront 2 smh :(

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