by manyeyedhydra
fucking casual gamers all they want is instant gratification make me awasome with little to no effort I think this dick is the guy that said to ea put more pay-to-win content in battlefront 2 smh :(
I love your writing and this story was one of your best! please make another!
one of your best ones yes cant wait for more,you really do write the best stories on here
My wife and I loved this one! It was an epic amusement and made for a great parody of all Japanese RPGs. Wonderful story line, and can't wait for the rematch.
Bigbear_2345
To read your work. Love the idea behind this one, hope you take the time to really explore it. Good work.
After the 40 or 50th time he dies tor her maybe he should try flowers or something - you never know....
Really like what we've seen of this so far. Since Jackson respawns when he di... err, Game-Overs, he could meet a huge number of interesting ends before manyeyedhydra decides to end this one.
One final thought from me - Anyone else think there's a possibility that the succubus might be another Player Character trapped in the game like Jackson? Or maybe an actual Succubus instead something created by the game. The potential here is endless...
Already read the story on your blog. Since I like JRPGs, humourous stories and succubi, I couldn't help but fall in love with the story.
Would be great if the succubus reveals herself to be his second party member after he beats her. (I already wondered where the boring magician girl that falls in love with the hero over the course of the game was.)
And that's putting it mildly.
It's good to see your work again and uploading it on my birthday is an added treat. Thank you very much!