All Comments on 'Jackson Kez - Space Diplomat Ch. 03'

Ooh, this had a lot of twists I wasn't expecting. The D/s scene wasn't my thing, but it was a very effective way to move the story along.

Personally, I'm not fond of cliffhangers - all I can say is to please give us the next chapter soon - and please don't you dare abandon the story halfway through, like a number of great writers on here have.

I want to read all of it, and then a few more chapters for good measure.

Keep it coming, the story holds much potential for unusual and rich diversity, dont rush it, if you have the time, let the story develop.

At first I was a little uneasy but the way you presented Yucce‘s fetish was interesting and genuinely clever, a really good read. Tbh I have kinda fallen in love with the way you write this story and the sheer amount of emotional presentation and deepness of the characters is astounding. I can only agree with my commenting peers, this is a story I am personally really looking forward to see it continued while pleading for you not to rush it. Take your time, good things come to those who wait. Thank you for this chapter :)

Very well thought out and written. I'm an unconscious editor/proofreader, I can't help it, but I found so few typos it was like reading any published work.☺