All Comments on 'Jacob's Landing'

Very interesting story!

5

Lovely.

Outstanding.!!!! What a great story, thank you, and please keep writing!!

A gentle story. Will there be a follow-up?

Snippets of unfinished story outlines pasted together loosely with a Deus ex machina that is not made integral to tale.

Nothing for ages and then two stories in the space of a heartbeat. 👍. A nice compilation of snapshots and for a few minutes I entered a world inhabited by others while sitting in the sunshine, in a comfortable chair, and with a glass of cold, cloudy lemonade.

This has opened up lots of memories for me. As well, it is cause for thought in regards to how we flow through life.

Great read, thanks for sharin g

I found this story to be very interesting. Multiple stories in one. Very well done.

With respect

DG Hear

Vignettes of troubled souls. A powerful and moving story. Each of us has a story to tell. Mine is tragic in its simplicity. A parent who should never have been a parent, with a narcissistic streak a mile wide.

Peace to you all!

Good

Pieces of life tied together by park and benches