All Comments on 'Jade'

The story was good, but why was it written out twice? It revealed Jade's inner thoughts and her Daddy Dom's reaction when she asked him to hurt her. It also revealed that he had not done so before as he feared she would leave him. They just need to communicate more and they will be happy together.

I love this story so much- and it is well written but at some parts confusing. This is honestly how I feel and I like that it's one of the very few stories on here I can relate to.

This was incredibly hot, but also so emotionally powerful. The vulnerability and connection they shared made me cry. I haven’t come across many stories that really speak to what an act of love it can be to give another person the pain they need. You seem to understand both sides of that dynamic. Thank you for sharing this story.