All Comments on 'Jade's X Rated Videos for Uncle Ch. 01'

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Top marks for the ability to describe with such intense detail. Clearly, you're a verbal acrobat possessed of skills akin to the flying families. Most wield the verbose if not implausibly impish, obvious to the intent reader their purpose. Appreciable was the sharp and complete descent from seduction. Your understanding of the role played by the female on a male's mind is seldom demonstrated by others making it glaring to one who does also. I write this uncharacteristically long appraisal intent upon girding up your understanding of this reader.

Your time and creativity being grandly appreciated, thank you.

Slow seduction as old as time yet still timless in modern times

Great story! I'd take a little more time to proofread and check for grammar errors, but aside from that, it's a great story and I really enjoy it! I can't wait for more!

wish this relation would be my case with my niece strangely named the same name...

Thank you sargedog1 for appreciating and getting my intent. xo Anon and anon, thank you. xo Glad you related to the story in a different way, pp78xxx. Awh, jay2kay. Does this mean I don't get a grade on my paper.

Great job, thanks for sharing your work.

Interesting. A woman writing the man's point of view. So often it is the other way around. Well done!!