- Incest/Taboo
- Jail Bird Pt. 01
- Comments
All Comments on 'Jail Bird Pt. 01'
by soul71
- 35 Comments
linnearabout 4 years agoThis is going to be a good one. Just like all of your other stories this feels like it could go anywhere and I'm so going to enjoy the ride. I was wondering how a blind woman could become such a powerful dom.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThe story line has so much potential. I cant wait to see where it goes. You have a gift. Thank's.
Xzy89c1about 4 years agoSilly. Death row is just that. A separate part of prison. He would not be around other non death row inmates.
meuciabout 4 years agoIt is going to be weird but I think a good weird. 5 stars for this chapter and I can't wait to see where it goes.
far_wanderer1984about 4 years agoCan't wait to read more out this story, another start to what it's looking to be a brilliant story.
Idgaf71about 4 years agoThe one problem I have with your writing is that you have several stories on at the same time. That leaves waiting for the next installment and trying to keep track of different story lines. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoYou're off to a great start with this. Nice background setup of the main character. For me, it got a little confusing in the middle of the story. It was difficult to tell which of the sisters was reminiscing about past events sometimes.
Overall though 5 *'s PLUS.
Anonymousabout 4 years ago,Hope you write athe police Officer when they both sleep in her flat! Let him wake up with a hard on and carol coming out of shower in her short bath rone and accidentally shot her naked bald pussy to him while bending to get her knickers to wear! So starts their affair and ends up in a three-some with naked Carol and Jessica with Max in the middle!
Skalkurinabout 4 years agoThis story has so much potential and is such a great start to a new series.
Five stars from here.
Tyson001about 4 years agoCan't wait for your next chapter.....
It's simply MIND BLOWING...
EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
sniffpantiesabout 4 years agoNext he should take Carol....then his parents for abandoning him...
Cutty4637about 4 years agoYou do know how to peek peoples attention. Really do love your writing. Please keep it up.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoGood story. Please continue. However, you have others that I wish you would continue/finish also.
Queijadaabout 4 years agoI was gonig to lambast you about the ADA getting into orgies and all that jazz, but the BDSM club kinda covered that. Really hope there's more than meets the eye with Kate's motives, and it's not just some random "oh you saved now here's you reward" kind of thing. since you know pretty much everyone remotly connected to Max is her bitch.
One minor criticism is the fact that Max's mom didnt't know he was getting out. That doesn't happen, the media would've been on it since day freaking 1. It's not everyday that a guy gets out of deathrow, it may not go national level news, but it would definetly reach state level, and the obligatory discussion on the death penalty and how inocent men in jail blah, blah, blah.
Erin93about 4 years agoI love the implementation of this story, I look forward to the continuation of this adventure
kaidmanover 3 years agoit is most likely not the same club but it would be cool if there was a connection like if kate knew scarlet
so far the only stories here that are connected directly are family secret , pornstar family, and pharaohs curse while unbelievable has the events of those existing as comics which would be awesome if they were in comic form
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoSlightly wierded out by how fast he could fuck the bitch that put him away for 6 years. In his place I would have stopped the moment it became clear she enjoyed getting fucked and instead would have settled on beating the shit out of her.
Aussie19516 months agoAll hail Max, the new master of the universe. I wouldn’t be surprised if he didn’t take over and became the new master. What better punishment than to give Jennifer and his sister babies , ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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