by jackie_em
i love stories like this i hoped for it to be longer and more detail. i am trans my self.love to read more hot transitioning stories.best to you.
I wish I could take that Journey with her. I believe Jaime could be such a lovely lady.
Roxanne
I loved the story, but it's lacking a bit on the motivation: Why does she transforme him
Your story was a very nice discovery tonight. Very tightly written and a believable, if somewhat exotic, premise. While I had to hold back my inner criticism of Susan's duplicity for doing this to Jamie in such a calculating way...you made up for it by making it a love story ! I've just posted a somewhat similar series of stories (although mine doesn't go the full transition route), so it was very enjoyable to see the way you handled it. Very well done = 5 stars from me !
Your story is wonderful. Just the right mix of seduction, submission, sex, and love. I have long wished that I could enjoy such a journey. Got me excited yet romantic at the same time. Please write more.
What's Susan ' s motivation for the transformation and what about their families, we hear nothing at all about their reactions.
A great read non the less
I agree why did she choose Jamie did Jamie's family ever find out and how did they react
Nice, well written story. Agree with other poster's complaint's about Jamie's parents. Kind of a dark hole in the story. Needs to be fleshed out a tad. But when Mike and Dave go to blackmail Jamie, all I could think about was the Aerosmith song. Thus the title of my comment. LOL.
Susan saw the girl in him . I thought the whole story well thought out just the end a bit rushed . Yes the dilation is about right . Takes a few months to stop hurting and bleeding then can be somewhat pleasurable . Thanks again
As a bi man, would love to have Jaime as my offspring as he becomes a she...
I wish it would have ended on a happy note instead of melancholy. She didn't act all that happy. I would have been ecstatic.
Well thought out story. Really enjoyed it right to the end. Love the way Susan transitioned Jamie. Would have given you a 10 but five is as high as they go. Happy that Susan kept her word about getting married and staying with Jamie.
While the story is good and well written, I’m not a fan of trust breaking stories!
Susan did deceive Jamie, only saving grace is that she didn’t leave Jamie for some guy.
It some how looks like Susan arranged blackmailing and rape as well.
A well written story that had me on the edge for a while, I wish it was me, as I’m struggling with my mental state of transition right now, it’s a lot to be doing all at once, I believe us women care more about one another than many men think.
Samantha