All Comments on 'Jake and Jordan Share a Dorm Pt. 02'

by KennyAD23

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I really hope you will continue this story. It is really hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please!

I do hope you will continue with this story! I would love to read about more of their college antics and their double-life as brother / sister and yet lovers. More please! :)

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

Does anyone actually play truth or dare, or is it just a fantasy way to get story characters naked. The only times I have ever seen it is in USA films, tv shows and stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Continuation

I look forward to the development of the twins relationship. Hopefully there will be more chapters. Thanks for what you’ve written so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
PLEASE MORE

I enjoyed the story so far and would love to see what happens next for the twins. The only thing is you need to write more then just 1 page as 1 page is to short! You need to write at least 2 or more pages.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

I'm really enjoying this story. But I'm sorely disappointed that the comments made were from nearly a year ago. No recent updates? If we don't get more it will be a crying shame. 😭 5/5

ScottishTexanScottishTexan10 months ago

Nothing more added and it's been more than 2 years since my last comment. I guess that we can officially declare that this story is now an orphan. It's a crying shame because I really enjoyed the little bit that was published. 😢

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