All Comments on 'Jake Explores'

I loved every stroke.

No pun intended. But the simultaneous description of his fantasy, what was on the screen, and his reality was very well done. Very hot story, especially as extended as the sex was. Excellent job.

I loved this one keep up the good work.

You painted a spectacular picture with your words here, my friend. It's a wonderful piece of work. Well done

Without question, one of the best "beginning" gay tales on Literotica. You have a real talent, and I hope you'll keep this story going.

Keep writing, this story was great.

Where have all the supportive readers gone? What's more important, where has this fine writer gone? Did WE fail Him? I like your character and situation development. Hope you return. OK. Maybe you have, just to a more supportive, fully published-for-profit venue. If so, congrats! Thanks for sharing your creative mind and talents.