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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

He was quite skinny because of his building and because, unlike the other guys, he had never done any sport.

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He was quite skinny because of his GENETICS and because, unlike the other guys, he had never done any sport.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I had to stop reading. Please find an editor. Good luck.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

We're still waiting for chapter 2...... Please continue!!!

JulieKinkyWriteJulieKinkyWrite6 months agoAuthor

Chapter 2 is coming but i'd like to find an editor to be extra sure that it's readable.

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