All Comments on 'Jamaica vacation for Midwest couple'

This load of garbage should have been sent to the voyeur section since this was your first time I’ll be gentle cuckold is a voyeur just because you put words into your story saying loving wife wrong section because this section is a very very tough section to write in this story is going to get slammed this section section is like a hero and villains section or a tv drama in other words wife or husband cheats the other hurt party aka the other husband and wife take revenge aka divorce or kills them at the end of the day the hurt party becomes the hero this section doesn’t like it when cheaters prosper because they know when someone cheats or disrespects there wedding vows by using this cuckold crap or swinging someone always gets hurt just for sake of a bit of sex they are proud people that read this section so you will get slammed for this story sorry

Another first time author starting out with the classic ir/cuck story. Definitely on the way to big things in LW.

She needs to go home with a special souvenir A BLACK BABY BUMP

Hope hubby catches them and then charters a boat and drops their bodies in the sea.

With all these Jamacian divorce stories... take you unloved spouse to

Jamicia, let her get pregnant by some stud and leaver her there? Just get up one morning and pack up and leave with whatever you really care about... but making your kids have to care for a pregnant mom while she carries their half Jamacian sibling might piss them off even more. Your idea is simply too expensive for getting rid of someone you hate.

Did he fix the sink?

So did he fix the sink. And hope there is more, sounds like her vacation will really loosen her up but in a good way.

What's she going to do when her husband confronts her with her cheating? Because a blind man is going to know she cheated. If you're going to write this type of story at least make your characters smarter than rocks. This was awful.

1 star

I love BBC anywhere anytime. Jamaica is a good choice for fun xoxoxoxoxo Annette ♠️♠️♠️💋💋

is no more common than WBC. What is more common BD(iseased)C and BL(imp)C. Just ask black women. Those are among the reasons educated black women tend to prefer white men. Jamaica is not only a hot bed of STDs, it's crime ridden. Cruise lines have resorts they own to keep all but a few carefully screened locals out. The story is idiotic and belongs in interracial.

Bob set all this up from the beginning including telling Rafael about the sink and his day long absence. Well written. Nice job

Did you just forget to submit the rest of the story?

Sounds like a wonderful experience!

Anything credible in this overused and abused plot? Not even the characters...1*

what happens in Jamaica stays in Jamaica....including slut wives. She would have been left and forgotten about. Let the whore swim back. Or even better maybe she can work for the resort as stress relief. That is about all the whore is good for.

...if she just came from snowy Minnesota, how did she get the terrific tan you keep referring to?

How is it that these women just happen to get entranced by the mystical black snake and forget about fidelity, or the love they had 24 hours previously for their family, children and husband?

The authors on this site that lower the IQ of submissions thru mediocre themes are getting lame. Grow up Bois, or start submitting under gay erotica, at least there you can develop your true feelings.

Every negative comment is by anonymous except impo64 whose critisicm of being overused plot is not out of line. Not bad for your first story, keep it up. If you posted this in Interracial you likely would get another 1/2 point on your score. Don't be deterred by the anonymous negatives

and this story reflects your talent and aspirations? Or you just wanted to take a shit in the punch bowl and enjoy the response. You have to get in line to shit in this punch bowl. Bet your even greater talent is silently farting in a crowded room then slinking out.

Your existence is punishment enough. Don't even contemplate it, just give society some relief.

Now give us the second part of this LW tale. I'll look forward to seeing it here. 5 stars.

And ignore all the idiots who read this knowing what was going to happen then act outraged. They only slammed the story after they finished cumming on their bellies.

This shows a lot of potential! Keep writing and don't pay attention to the haters.

Wish I had your way with words. Perfect advice for aspiring LW authors.

Pathetic! Oh and for the cry baby sissy who complains about annoys

we are all anonymous even those with shit names. I'm not sorry if negative comments hurt your feelings. Grow a set and move on.

She will develop a love for bbc

My husband told to let my hair down and enjoy myself. I let go to much but, I did enjoy it all I let a woman rub oil on me she even open my string suit on the beach so that my breast were out and people would stop and take pictures of us she would pull the string open on the bottom but she only put her hands in and would rub my pussy.

Keep them cumming my husband likes it when I read these to him.

Will

All hobbies gets is a stupid slut, ugly.

And she was pregnant, so to be divorced.

But, did he fix the sink?

Hope her husband found out and divorce the cheating slut

Hot sex, but very predictable. And what about that leaking sink?