All Comments on 'James'

by leo_thedirewolf

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jonkingbrothersjonkingbrothersabout 2 years ago

Their hunger for each other is a thing of true erotic beauty. The storyline is powerful, the atmosphere you create is hypnotic, and the sex is amazing. Your work is amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is fantastic! I definitely wanted it to keep going, but it ends so well. But that doesn't matter. Like Damien, I'll keep coming back.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

WOW!!! Your story was hot and sexy and quite beautiful. Loved the slow build, getting hotter and hotter as it went along. Thought this was heading in a totally different direction when I first started reading. Really liked the slowly softening of James' attitude and Damian's gradual realization that he was actually bisexual. This was one of your best stories yet, *****plus. Thanks, MLF

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is the best story ever! Thank you sedgee :)

HairyJacquesHairyJacquesabout 2 years ago

Amazing story--incredibly erotic. Even though I knew how it had to end--that Damian and James would become a couple--I somehow didn't see it coming. It was cool how you used blunt honesty to propel the story forward. There was no sneaking, no manipulation, and no subterfuge. James and Damian were direct, manful, and manly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Love this story! Would love a part 2!

bhart1bhart1about 2 years ago

A very nice piece of erotic fiction. There was an actual story to get involved in. Well done.

sjreardonsjreardonabout 2 years ago

Oh, awesome! Really quality stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Thanks for the best story I have read in a long time!!!

bamaguy326bamaguy326about 2 years ago

Very well written, had me hooked very quickly. Keep up your wonderful writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

beautiful! Enjoyed it very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow

Exluke1Exluke19 months ago

This was so honest for everyone, except Joy (although her going so far away without a really strong reason is reasonably frustrating). Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Really great story and writing. It was written in an economical, direct style that fit perfectly with the narrative and the characters.

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