by leo_thedirewolf
Their hunger for each other is a thing of true erotic beauty. The storyline is powerful, the atmosphere you create is hypnotic, and the sex is amazing. Your work is amazing.
This is fantastic! I definitely wanted it to keep going, but it ends so well. But that doesn't matter. Like Damien, I'll keep coming back.
WOW!!! Your story was hot and sexy and quite beautiful. Loved the slow build, getting hotter and hotter as it went along. Thought this was heading in a totally different direction when I first started reading. Really liked the slowly softening of James' attitude and Damian's gradual realization that he was actually bisexual. This was one of your best stories yet, *****plus. Thanks, MLF
Amazing story--incredibly erotic. Even though I knew how it had to end--that Damian and James would become a couple--I somehow didn't see it coming. It was cool how you used blunt honesty to propel the story forward. There was no sneaking, no manipulation, and no subterfuge. James and Damian were direct, manful, and manly.
A very nice piece of erotic fiction. There was an actual story to get involved in. Well done.
Very well written, had me hooked very quickly. Keep up your wonderful writing!
This was so honest for everyone, except Joy (although her going so far away without a really strong reason is reasonably frustrating). Thank you.
Really great story and writing. It was written in an economical, direct style that fit perfectly with the narrative and the characters.