All Comments on 'James & Louisa Go to Paradise'

Although the "how-to" stuff was a bit technical at times, the characters were engaging and the action arousing.

Melva, you've got a nice literary style that is enhanced by your vocabulary and obvious knowledge of the subject matter. I hope this will turn into a series as these 3 folks may have stumbled on to something in the dunes besides seashells. Tell us more about Nikki's background, as well as James' and his wife's. Can we get to meet their other bi-sexual female friend too? I like the mentoring that Nikki gratuitously brings to the party. Keep 'em cumming. Ken in Calif.

At last--erotica about real people with bulges and small penises. This is the hottest submission I've read because the characterizations are so real and the descriptions so vivid and true to life. Let's have more!

Let's have some more for James and Louisa. Great descriptions, compelling characters.