All Comments on 'James and Sarah Pt. 01'

This girl is delicious.

How does this tale

develop?? What is the conclusion? Is Sarah successful?? Inquiring minds???

And how is this non con

I was into it until... he reaches up inside her and feels something?evidence of her virginity. Umm do yo know what hymens are? They are not deep inside yet thin skin surrounding the vaginal opening so once a girl has sex that’s what entrance opens up... not deep inside 😣

So what happened any updates???

I want to thank you for pointing it out, as sometimes when I write, I go in special mode/thought process as I wan't details for you all.... but yes I slip up... and no have not found someone to help me proof my stories yet but should have caught it. I will be doing a correction for both...

Again thanks

As I have been working two jobs as of late, My story has gone to the sidelines but with summer break now upon us, trying to fix a few issues some have pointed out and will get the next chapter out soon.