All Comments on 'James' New Job Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I can't wait to read more x sissy Lucy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very good start. I like that you aren't rushing right in with the heavy sex, but I'm sure the sex will happen soon.

StrappySandalsStrappySandalsabout 1 year ago

Not big on the story being strung out... But this has potential. I did like how the boss stayed straight with James about the opportunity... I'm all-in so far... Let's hope it works out!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This has potential! So far I like it, be nice if next chapter was a little longer.

KatiwantsKatiwantsabout 1 year ago

I can’t wait for more!! Great story so beautiful 😍

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

More please! And my female name is also Jennifer. Love it

LondonGurlLondonGurlabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you all for your comments. This chapter was always going to be a prologue of sorts, mainly introducing the main characters and the setting and as such is shorter than the other chapters which will be both longer and more in depth.

JBARYJBARYabout 1 year ago

Love this!!! Can't wait for the next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Any word on when the next chapter is coming?

Great start.

Kathryn65Kathryn65about 1 year ago

Love the start please do keep the chapters coming long and fast . Xxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent beginning. Interesting characters in an unusual situation taking place inside a world class hotel. This sounds very promising and it could possibly lead off a series of stories in different cities.

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