by LondonGurl
Very good start. I like that you aren't rushing right in with the heavy sex, but I'm sure the sex will happen soon.
Not big on the story being strung out... But this has potential. I did like how the boss stayed straight with James about the opportunity... I'm all-in so far... Let's hope it works out!!
This has potential! So far I like it, be nice if next chapter was a little longer.
Thank you all for your comments. This chapter was always going to be a prologue of sorts, mainly introducing the main characters and the setting and as such is shorter than the other chapters which will be both longer and more in depth.
Excellent beginning. Interesting characters in an unusual situation taking place inside a world class hotel. This sounds very promising and it could possibly lead off a series of stories in different cities.