All Comments on 'Jametown Ferry'

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Nightowl22Nightowl22over 17 years ago
Not a bad story...

but you desperately need a spell checker if nothing else. I don't think there was a sentence without at least one misspelled word. And some words missing and tenses mixed!

One thing wrong with the story---he's an asshole.

I know that scenario is nothing unusual but it is a shameful thing, especially the WAY he left.

Lineboss89Lineboss89over 14 years ago
GREAT STORIE

I sure hope you continue this storie line. It has a lot of potential. Both players have a long trip to find there way back.

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