by Stern Daddy
If my daddy ever treated me like that I would never have sex with him again. My daddy loves to buy me presents and would not have reacted like that.
Sorry but you about ruined the story when you almost had her get gang banged in the club but feel that is where you are headed.
Ruined the story by unneccessary violence.
Also the usual shaming of prostitutes!
This is so boring! And so 19. Century.