All Comments on 'Jamie - The Journey Begins Ch. 02'

of characters. Very well written. I suspect the impatience of the usual readers to 'get to the good stuff' accounts for the undeserved decrease in scores. This is not your average quick-read story. Your fan-base should prepare to be 'in it for the long haul'. Keep writing, hutch. Some of us like being fed finger-foods by candlelight.

Hutchison12, I was checking out story spinner and the first chapter popped up. I read it and really enjoyed it. So, I am going to read all chapters. This chapter demonstrated you are a superb story teller and I appreciate the character development. I am off to chapter 3...