All Comments on 'Jamie's Pool Party Ch. 02'

Great story. Lokking fwd to more chapters and the new neighbors and parents to join the fun.

long wait

long story

so many twists and turns

but very hot

i love everyone doing everyone :P

don't know where to start the praise, this series is going to be one of my all-time favourites! chapter one was non-stop action yet well paced . usually stories with a lot of characters tend to get boring after telling for the tenth times how everyone came to orgasm. not here; well done. chapter two surprises with new turns and makes ch. 1 even more pleasant. i espeacially liked the different perspectives the story was told, though i think you should stick to either first or third person view. but as you already started this way, you can also stay on the road you picked. good work, lillian, keep it up!

Hey love! I have to say again that I loved it...you nailed Miro LOL! Yeah so I know that you had trouble with the 1st and 3rd person switch but I think it paid off. It gives the reader a better understanding of the rest of the characters and I must say that I enjoy it. If you get everything from one persons point of view things can get a bit dull as Mr Anonymous from Germany below said but this doesn't. Lil my love, I loved it. Keep it up and see you tonight, Love, Tiff

Learn to edit your story, you dumb bitch.

I'm really having fun with this series. Well done!