All Comments on 'Jamie's Pool Party'

Awesome story and such a refreshing change for it to be so long and detailed and not split into episodes of 1 page and then wait a month for an update!

dont listen to them other knobs. the story was great! keep em cumming!!!!

Very nice. Hope you will keep on writing! Just keep it up and you'll do fine.

i rather injoyed that

i like your style of writing

hope to read more in the near future

perhaps more interaction between the main character and perhaps the neighbor or the guys *weg*

I must say Lil that it was somewhat of a surprise to see my name in print. Loved the story and I hope you'll send me a message when you've updated. Grtz, Miro Antonio White.

Can't wait for further installments to your story...Great sex, great story, would love to be trapped between the lines...or sheets, or anyplace with the lot of them...

great..loved the story...very detailed...and non-stop action

now on to the anal!!!!!!!

Write more, but next time add some anal!

To all fans of Anal sex, your wish is my command. It will be done. Thanks for your comments so far and Thanks for reading, Lillian.

Great story. But you better write more soon and tell us exactly what is on that camcorder!

Great and funny. Please more !!!

Oh my dear love, I must say you've out done yourself on this one. Loved every line of it and I hope you'll continue this fantastic story. I must know what's on that tape! See you tonight! Your love, Tiff.

This stroy had all the elements I love. You covered all the bases. I would truely love to read the next installment of this story.

That was a great story well written, had me hard all the way through it. Can't wait for the next installment!

This is a very hot story. I loved it. It is well written and funny and sexy as Hell.

Nookiehunter

That was perfect, just awesome

You need an editor. All writers do.

With both Jamie and Sonjia's parents going to be in Hawaii, wouldn't it be fun for them to get together. Then, who knows what happens when they get home. Great series so far.

Many spelling and grammatical errors that detract.

Badly in need of some editing, as others have stated