All Comments on 'Jan in California Pt. 02'

Wonderful sequel to Pt. 1, with great characters and a fine plot that certainly holds the attention of the reader. The love scenes are marvelous.

Anonymous

Thank you for the kind words. I hope you enjoy the rest of the series. -Emmerson

I can not find the Dallas School girls you keep referring to, love this action though.

Laughdruid

They are my deceased wife’s group of friends who pass our hero around in several other of my stories, including the later “Fantasies Fulfilled,” “Room 128,” “Meryl & Mitch,” and “A Fun Video Call.” Most specifically discussed in “Room 128 part 4: addendum” (which is about the time I realized I had taken their existence for granted, without explaining to the readers)

There are some eight ladies in the Dallas School Girls (and one gay man) so I have been trying to find a way of telling about my time with each of them without getting repetitive. Oddly, as fun as it is having one sexual encounter after another, unless they are distinctly different (Like Sondra) the telling of it can get boring. I am certainly open to any suggestions.

Thank you for your comment.

-Emmerson