All Comments on 'J & J'

How many versions of this same story are there? Can you guys not come up with something slightly more original? The part that ruins every one of these is the mother telling the son it's okay if he has a hardon because "it's natural" to lust after your mother. The reality of a situation like that is she'd slap the shit out of him. That'll be the end of me reading anymore of your worthless submissions.

Good job, Nice story!

You need to write a second part.

Very hot!

How can a non-married, only child have a niece?

***Thanks for the read.

To anonymous: where does it say that June was an only child? I almost made that mistake, but took it out. It never says anything about brothers or sisters, but it doesn't say that she doesn't have any.

This gets a 3 it has potential to be a 5 but was to rushed no way would mom be up for anything in her condition that quickly

like the brace aspect with the mom, but need another chapter or two

Brilliant, this love between a mother and son could only be the best....

Just came across this really well writen and while I enjoyed this very much I can hope that there will be more. This story ended with such possibilties.

After reading some of the comments by one reader posting as anonymous the author did state she was trying tan for her neices wedding meaning she must have had a sibiling

Part two is Jerry gets tickets to that concert he was trying to hear about.

He takes June, and stuff starts to happen (choose one, or all):

1-things progress between J&J at the concert, concluding with naked

midnight swimming back at home (next few days too)

2-his buddy recognizes them and causes embarassment

3-June is hot! Other concertgoers try to swoop June out from Jerry. He

doesn’t know what to do

4-she’s preggers

Just stuff I’d like to see; with your imagination, it oughta be great!

Marvin