All Comments on 'Jane and I'

This is one of the best stories i've ever read. Sweet seduction........gotta love it. More, please, more!

what a pity jane isn't around to take care of the boner your story left me with

good read, kinda a pity she left.

WOW, wish that would happen to me..;-)

Great story but a bit too short, maybe you can write a part 2 perhaps?

Otherwise excellent writing.

It was a good story and I enjoyed reading it, however; the dialoge seemed to be forced, like the characters are bad actors reading a script.

Now the story itself was good, great idea for the setup, but try and work on the character's interaction.

Loved the sweet seduction and teaching for the first timer, would haved to have her as my first!! Well written and wonderful first time submission. Thank you!!

It's always good to see nice people enjoying each other. Thank you for a nicely written story.

perfect. keep writing!

Simple, heart wearming, consensual, that s what Sex should be like... Great Story

What a turn on reading this story was. Made me wish I would meet someone like this hottie. Male character should have kept in contact with her though. Maybe he could have done some naked Skyping with her,at least. Heh.

Great exciting cum story lucky lad got to cum in her so many times I’m so jealous of the lucky Bastard