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by JBEdwards

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KlitomaticKlitomaticover 3 years ago
Quirky

Loved the premise, the reality, and yes the sex.

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 3 years ago
Where?

Upstate New York? Did they move from Indiana? LOL I guess you're not in real estate, JB. Location. Location. Location. But as long as they located the cocks and cunts as described, all is well! Fun story as usual. Five stars.

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterover 3 years ago
Fun, but get an editor?

That was a nice story, but wow, it really needed editing. There were a lot of Very clunky sounding, matter of fact sort of sentances that could have been written in a more interesting way. It took away from what was otherwise a really good, happy, sexy story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Glasses That Cure Dyslexia?!!

I don't think so.

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