All Comments on 'Jane Doe Shows Off'

Excellent

A pretty common fantasy but very well dealt with, a plain, no nonsense romp, loved it.

If looking for something to appeal to your purient interest, this might be the one. Worked for me.

Sex, humor, good descriptions, erotic story, this has it all. Thanks.

her hubby was predictable. I could not have been that "cool."

Loved how you wove the story together.

The length was almost too much but you held us in there.

We weren't surprised at the full penetration but it wasn't expected.

I've been reading good LW stories earlier, now for some garbage like this one.