All Comments on 'Janet, Chrissie and Me Ch. 01'

I enjoyed the build up, waiting period and looking forward to mom

teaching Ryan. Then please make sure mom is

there when Chrissie comes of age to prepare her

for Ryan. Thanks for writing.

great start can't wait to read more.

I like where this is going. The pace could be slowed down.

Keep writing for this one please. Awesome story so far.

super hot. cant wait to see what's next for this great Family

Please continue more chapters. I have enjoyed the story much. Thanks

What a great build up

Excellent story. Thanks

Wow no real sex in the entire story and yet I am extremely wet. Lovely story well written.

I see a great story in the making. I will be watching for more from you.

Good story, good idea. Could have been longer and more detailed.

I saw the ending coming from the Sunday when Janet gave the kids her birds and bees lecture. But I stuck with it to the end anyway. You screwed it up by not leaving it strictly for Ryan and Chrissie to fall in love. I'll never understand why every brother/sister incest story has to get the mother involved (or either parent for that matter).

Personally, that ruins the story for me. 1/5