All Comments on 'Janet, Chrissie and Me Ch. 02'

love ot so far can't wait for the next chapter. Lol hopefully sooner rather then later

A follow up?

Of course. You can't leave Chrissie waiting for her birthday treat, that would be terrible.

Good follow on from first chapter.

5*****

While I am uncomfortable with domination relationship this worked for me. I assume that somewhere in the future sister and birth mom will be added to the story.

Great storyline. Love the interaction of everyone. Thanks for sharing, looking forward to the next chapters!!

Can't wait for Chapter 3

more please

Yup. We wish.

FDD

mmmmmmmmm 100% HOT thanks for the nut

Really enjoying this! She should have given him her panties in the restaurant though. Let's continue...

Beautiful and sexy. Very hot.

But it probably would have been more interesting to add the panty scene in the restaurant. Mom could have taken them off in front of her son and daughter and given them to her son or the waiter.Son caresses her a little with his hand and checks how wet she has become.

The cunnilingus scene is unclear. He was already fondling her with his tongue after he took off his dress. We need to revise the dialogue.

I loved the ladies use of the word cunt . Especially when referring to their own vaginas.

The flow of the sex was jerky and non-descriptive it failed to bring out an exciting feel. It contained way too much dialog.

Why are you trying so hard to make them british? No one talks like that unless they're super upper class.

Very well written

Sex happens. Because. No connection.

Five**5**Stars...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠💫💫💫💫💫🌪️🌪️🔥🔥🔥🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋💯

First chapter, only 4 Stars...it dragged and dragged...was just weird!! You have redeemed that with Chapter 2, and hopefully this will continue into the remaining 17 chapters!!

As to the comment about the grammar you use...how the characters speak...I get the real feeling that you are British...another of your stories has the same tone and rhythm to it...mostly enjoyable...distracting at times but so fun!!

On to the next chapter...see how the whole thing developes!! Yyyaaayyy!!!!!