All Comments on 'Janet Moore Ch. 02'

Ch. 01 was very good and Ch. 02 is even better. The nc/reluctant category is my favorite and your stories rank among the best that I have read. I'm wondering who will take the beautiful Janet Moore next for his selfish pleasures. Endless possibilities exist beyond family, neighbors, friends, peers, strangers and even the elderly minister/counselor (hint). I will be reading and enjoying whatever you write and thanks for your contributions.

Liked it a lot... However, you do need to proof your stories a little better. Quite a few typos and "Tom" suddenly becoming "Jim" near the end distract from the flow of the story... which is otherwise really hot.

Good write did you notice you changed the guys name from Tom to Jim ?

id love to see this continue, maybe janet can go back to the shark. pay some of hubbies debts.

Sarah

Trying to understand this story is impossible.

Last story we had Ben Pierce who in this story became Jim Pierce then Tom became Jim FFS.

A good story totally spoilt by bad writing.