All Comments on 'Janet Rides Her Son in Hospital'

Very promising begining 5 stars please continue the good work.

Opps.....lol Fun read. 5 stars.

Oops 😬

Doesn't work that way. Not even believable. Try again. Start with a believable storyline.

1 star.at least know how hospitals work if you are going to use them in your story.Plus there are no more dorm style rooms in hospitals in the civilized world.Got to know hippa regulations also.

Lot of keyboard critics in tonight . . .

I enjoyed it. Plenty of room to fill that story out . . .

Cum for Mommy. "Good boy . She felt awkward and guilty, but also proud that her tits, caused her son to have another erection and she got a confidence boost

OKAY, BUT LACKING A LOT.

Ignore the bad comments. It’s hard to get very deep into a story in 750 words. I think it’s a commendable beginning.

Didn't like this it was too short and lacking information if he just got a scratch then why is he in the hospital 2 stars

Great story and I'll be back