All Comments on 'Jan's Screen Test'

I very much appreciate the effort you put into your stories, keep up the good work and so says my wife( another wet pussy for her)

I think you should end the series. It lacks suspense especially in a prequel. I think you could do one shots of different couples with different situations and different outcomes. I enjoy your writing.

you write very well, and should continue the series. Maybe Michael should understand that he wants to submit as well.

enjoyable and a fun and adventurous read. stopping here would be a shame. more please!

Please keep writing. I’d love for my wife to get a good stretching from Shane Diesel. How lucky she is.

Keep writing, every white wife should get to experience a porn star sized bbc at least once. My wife is addicted to her bull's 10 inch black monster.

continue it's great.

I have a horse and then an elephant to lend you.

must not stop there. bigger still. 👍

Keep going this is hot!

Just came across this new submission and really enjoyed it. Went back and read the two prequel stories to this one before coming back to post a comment. Next I'm going back to read the rest of your submissions. How's that for encouragement.

Excellent series hope you change your mind and write more of Jan and this new direction.

I sometimes think that there are so many good stories on Lit. that you forget good writers deserve praise. You write brilliantly. I have been gripped by Jan's journey amd I have always enjoyed stories where shy wives are gradually transformed into wanton fucktoys. I was looking forward to Jan gradually getting drawn into massive black cock gangbangs. I love the idea of her taking black cock in all of her holes and her two hands at the same time - a full service slut! I love the idea that her man supports her and I do not think it makes him appear weak. I think it is about allowing the lovely Jan to fully express her sexuality in a loving relationship. Please continue. At least three more episodes with Jan getting increasing;y and regularly used as a gangbang cumslut.

thoroughly enjoyed. The husband's acceptance added the realistic twist. Perhaps time for his humiliation. Looking forward to your next chapter.

story kept me g;ued to see what would comer next wish i was Jan

excellent series. definidely much more to expand upon.

a next step could be Shane and Jan insisting on the husband's participation and then the filming of his progressively more severe humiliation. Jan could begin to enjoy and orchestrate her hubby's humiliation as a selling point of the films, and take it to the full extreme on and off the set. Definitely please keep going.

Excellent series! There is definitely a well thought out story. Much more to elaborate on.

Great story focus & great theme. Please continue with Jan in this story roll.

Loved the story!!

hot hot hot !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don’t stop writing. My pussy is soaked. I wish I could get stretched by a huge cock like Jan with people watching.

Great series,I love all of your stories, and wish I was Jan!

I wish my wife was more like Jan

Il loved your story and wish you were my wife.

Wow.... Still wanting to get his side of the story.... Get him involved... Cleanups... Chastity.... Please continue

Great story, thank you. Appreciate more of them.

The Jan series of stories is fabulous. The emerging discovery of desires, the anxiety over bareback risk, the development of stories into shared experiences with girl friends and double penetration. An edgers dream series.

This is my 3rd of the Jan stories and love them all. Really appreciated that reality aspect of this and the surprise that she experienced being on set with the unknown script. I hope to see and hear more of Jan's adventrues.

Fantastic story….you have it down right…keep going!

The three part Jan series was great. I'm sure a lot of people, me included, would like to see more of her stories.

Great series, I was hoping for more gang bang and cum swallowing.

Great series i really enjoyed it

Excellent, please continue