All Comments on 'Janus'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good story

The characters were good as well as their interaction. Nice plot progession. The flow was a little rough/jumpy in spots. I hope to see more of your work. Love to see a sequel. Thanks for sharing your talent.

noni2674noni2674about 14 years ago
more please

Please continue with this story. I am interested in Michael's tale. You have spun an excellent story.

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