All Comments on 'Jason Becomes Jazmine Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot

hot, cant wait for more ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
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Great two chapters. I think she needs to go out shopping. A girl needs heels and boots and her own lingerie, leather skirts and dresses. Please add more.

mistressanonymousmistressanonymousabout 13 years ago

could use a bit of cleaning up, but overall it's good. just little things like using the capitalized He after the beginning of a sentence is usually reserved for deities, stuff like that.

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