by Maude1067
Fantastic! Could use a little editing (you call Jane Joan sometimes). Would love a part 2!!
Having been in the situation where I had a broken thumb, I know how embarrassed one can be when someone else had to help. Adding in the fact of a relative to help definitely can lead to some sexual tension. It did in this story and found it exciting. I found myself in similar circumstances and ended up having sexual encounters with aunt and uncle, grandma and grandpa, and yes my mom and dad.
Not a bad story over all.
Would it have been so difficult to get the sister "Jane" and the mother "Joan" referenced correctly in the story?
The author is consistently inconsistent, in other words, at times calling the daughter "Joan" when "Jane" is the sister's name. Why do so many author's think it's so clever to give characters similar names. Sheesh.