All Comments on 'Jayden Cole takes Control'

I didn't even read this tripe. From description "28GG boobs"??? Talk about fiction.

....and a Brit but even you should know that 28gg is two balloons on a broomstick.Keep at it though-pistolpackinpete

I'm giving 100% because I liked the story, even though it is a little ridiculous. If she had 28DD's and I might have thought of her as a freak, but the poor girl would have to use a special lifting device to carry those around those GG's. It gave me a chuckle though. Thanks for the story....Rich

did you mean 38GG?

Come back when you figure out how sizes work.

Jayden was inspired by a model who appeared in an issue of Loaded Magazine (a British lad's mag). Her bust size was listed as 28GG. In my first draft she was a 36GG but I thought I would keep Jayden true to the source model's elegant, delicate frame which serves to accentuate the size of her breasts. Yes in real life she probably suffers from chronic back pain but this is fantasy.

Don't listen to the other idiots who commented below. They come to a site like literotica and expect a true story. This was obviously a quick fun little tale, just right to get the juices running. Keep up the good work, I wanna see more.

Thanks!

....you anonymous coward-we come to this site to find erotic titillation which is unlikely when there is NO basis in reality for the story.I'll buy that some Twiggy-like freak with implants appeared in a Brit mag(where else?)-in that case that is just sad and not at all erotic, unless side-shows turn you on-pistolpackinpete

Another turd who gets angry at those criticizing the story and then he can't even spell!<p>What it is, is that most people know these stories are fantasy (or most of them). What we, that are critical of stories posted here, are getting at is the insane amount of drivel being posted here.<p>There's hardly ever anything worth reading much less finishing reading here anymore (in the incest section). We have to wait for real writers (we know who those are) to submit their works once a month.<p>In the meantime, the noobs keep leaving junk and expect good votes. Or the readers expect most of us to say "Good job" to something that isn't worth shit.

when I saw the title/description. Scanned it and left the rating because I saw nothing to dissuade me from doing what my first impression told me to do.

Hey I dated a girl that was 39D and seen a porn where the girl had 52KK so this isn't too far fetched you just need to have a really active imagination

Hey all you doubters. i have 40GG boobs. They are heavy and a pain in the back but real. Sends guys mad. So maybe you should just enjoy the story.

i liked the story although i thought a little more work could have been done on the work up to the actual incest

as for the size of the breast.... the model the story is based on is called Francoise Boufhal, check www.francoiseboufhal.com or http://www.maxim.co.uk/video/girls/18964/francoise_boufhal.html

I've read this story 3 times in the last 2 yrs and I can't help but give it a 5 everytime! The big titt lover that I am! Thank you!

you left it so open for alot more...so...where is it? give it up! your public is waiting!!