All Comments on 'Jaymie'

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TamalemanTamalemanabout 12 years ago
Hoping for page two...

A risky situation to be sure. I would like to have seen more emphasis on the risky part. All of it could have been expanded with more detail and more imagined stuff especially on the 4 hour trip. Still, it is good stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
And you stopped here? Leaving me hanging about the shower..

...and beyond the shower. Eroslit finish the story and then me!

BillybondageBillybondageover 20 years ago
Perfection

I just read "Jamie" and was completely turned on by it. Naturally, it got a "100" rating from me

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