All Comments on 'Jayne's World Pt. 02'

Can so relate

****Still very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

whens part 3 here

It is a good, but incomplete, story. I do believe a third part is called for. Unfortunately, my trips to London have all been uneventful when compared to James'.

If I were unattached, I would aspire to be this dirty old man.

Intriguing build up, that will surely develop into a more deeper relationship (given the number of chapters that this series has!)

At times I struggle to know who is speaking due to three switching off the narration from Him to Her and back again, but still love it