All Comments on 'Jayne's World Pt. 04'

I like these characters, and was enjoying getting to know them. Now I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out what happens next.

great story - hoping for a part 5 !

More please....

Absolutely loving this story….maybe because I am 60!!!

Love the words and descriptions from each of them, helping me feel like I am experiencing and living this through James.

Thanks

There's plenty more to come.

Love

Jaynexx

As Usual Lovely,

I adored it, thank you

Cat

Another great read, Jayne

Given there are many more chapters, Jayne naturally calls James, but is that later that night, tomorrow or in weeks’ time. Only going to have to read ch5 to find out!!