All Comments on 'Jay's Loelife Ch. 20'

Brilliant. Every time I read one of your stories, I feel like I am reading about personal friends.

I am so invested in these guys. Please hurry with the next chapter

I love this story. Thanks for writing it.

3 words. Loved it. More …

Wonderful writing. Lovely story. Always love the cameos by Aido! But these two still seem so far apart on life’s biggest and most important issues. I look forward to a face-to-face discussion with Lars and more insight into Loe’s family after they left him. Where else will this story take us?

“Sometimes it's like eating skittles and getting a sour patch.” Isn’t that life in a sentence? Important stuff here. A pee potato. A bottle of Macallan. Lars. Retirement? I was jonesing for an update and I was granted two. Brilliant.

Love these two. So good that Jay was so cool dealing with the money stuff, so now they can talk about other things. Jay already knows he is pushing his luck avoiding injuries and multiple concussions by playing so many games. I hope he doesn’t act like this whole decision is based on he and Loe’s plans together.

Your work is the pinnacle on this site. I look for your stories before and above all others. I'm so glad you continued this viewpoint from your other story as they deserve their own.

Really appreciate another rare moment of Sven chapter to slap those Sven haters silly. Turns out the guy is a good pal after all, and I am hoping that he could hang out again with Loren's crew, though I fully understand why he avoids them considering the circumstances.

First time reader and can’t put this down, love your style and this story is just amazing