All Comments on 'Jay's Loelife Ch. 27'

Loren and Lars parents are full of shit

Your ability to write a story is AMAZING

Literally had tears in my eyes. The meeting was so emotionally draining. Loved it though. What will his past friends think knowing what loe now knows.???

We need more on the double. Please and thank you. Awesome read. Yet again. U do no wrong to this series.

"The word count doesn't quantify its impact." That’s an absolute truth, Mrsgnomie. Perfect description of your writing. Five Stars and zero Kleenex, thank you.

😢. Closure is such a gift.

Well those must be among the worst parents to ever live. Blessed with precious twins, they abandon one at age 7 and rip the other away, lying to him his entire life…. I wonder what Lars is not telling Loe about them with his question about “have they reached out recently?” Loved to read some of the dynamic of their reunion but am SO disappointed that the 10-day visit was almost entirely skipped over!! Been waiting so long for their reunion and then just get teased with a bit. Also, who is this Josh? Please don’t bring any infidelity into this story - that would absolutely ruin it all.

I love this story and your others. You have such insight into emotions, both good and bad. The characters are flawed and real. The dialog is crisp, meaningful and funny. I do have a small question. In this chapter, Loe talks of going to Issac's house after he was abandoned. Previously he talked about going to Corey's house. Are they brothers?

Ctbikestrap:

Honestly, that’s just a case of detail flaw. After 120,000 words, it happens. Honestly, thousands of people would read this story prior to me posting on this site and not one caught it. You’re special

Oh wow. I found this story a whole back and started binge reading (it and Boss Nanny. I’m sorry to say I sorta judged a book by its cover the first time I stumbled across Boss Nanny but the prospect of a sequel finally gave me the push to read it lmao) and hot DAMN you don’t disappoint!! This has to be one of the most emotionally fulfilling stories on this website. It’s long, so I’ve gotten super emotionally attached to all the characters, but without dragging on or feeling endless. This is slightly poorly timed to comment since this update in particular is so somber, but this story just makes me so happy in a way that none have for a long time. I’m talking happy in a really excited, giddy, fangirlish squealing kinda way. Which is an emotional response that I normally only get when reading new installments in books or stories that I’ve gotten *severely* attached to and have been anticipating and waiting for. Which is weird, because I absolutely haven’t been waiting for updates on this, lmao. You write like a madman!! I said I binge read it, but that wasn’t entirely accurate. I got distracted and was dreading what I thought was gonna happen next so I didn’t pick it up again for a bit, and in that time, you posted like three new updates. I have been following you for a WEEK. three updates. In less than a week. Are you even human. How do you write that quick (Or is it prewritten? Genuinely though, please don’t burn yourself out writing too much. Quality is worth waiting for and you won’t be updating at all if you end up dead from overworking yourself). On an actually story related note, I love that we’re getting some more insight on what took place between the meat of Boss Nanny and its epilogue. I really can’t wait to see what happens with Loe and Lars. I reeeaaally love a good sibling dynamic. Not that you’ve left me lacking, of course, but I feel like they should get to be the kinds of twins that team up and terrorize everyone around them. It would make me so happy. One last little note: not to play favorites or anything but Matt is my favorite. I love him so so so much. He deserves everything. I love all of the characters, and Loren is a pretty kinda solidly close-ish second, but Matt is simply The Best. I love your writing and am looking forward to reading the next update!! <33

Awesome chapter as always! Wonder how Lars will be introduced to Lorens followers? That will totally break the internet for sure! Cue in the ridicious "twinning" hashtags! Seriously though Loren shares everything with his followers, think this will be a challenging situation for him to share. But if he shows up in pics with his twin, as we all know he will, that will demand a explanation.

Anon 4 months ago,

Calm your horses on infidelity and all that crap. Yes, infidelity is annoying to see in stories, but this is just proof that you didn't read the previous chaoters. Jay and Loen have had potential conflicts yet they dealt spectacularly with those so far. What makes you think this one will suddenly cause a huge mess when we got that photographer trying to bang Loren in the past but they shut it down in a heartbeat?

Anon right below this comment,

Are you the one talking about feet pics like a creep in the previous chapter? You rrally need to focus on the right things in the story. First of all, you skipped the entire reunion scene between Lars and Loren. There needs to be some more talk before introducing Lars to the fanbase considering how, as he said, it makes him seem like he's only catching up because of Loren's popularity. I get that imagining the situation is expected while discussing the chapter, but yours so far have been so far-fetched because you just went off on a tangent while blatantly ignoring everything going on in the chapter.