All Comments on 'Jay's Slut Ch. 02'

I hope you keep these coming, it was worth the wait

Only way to ake this story better is AUDIO!

Love it,keep writing and for godsake put the bunny down!!! :)

You dirty slut, why weren't you in my bedroom today!

So want to read chapter three!

Ah the things we do for love babe

Dude must have some fucking talent to treat you like this!

Then again maybe you have some sexual talent he has to have and hides it under the Dom mask....or hes a tool and you let him rule you?

Either way hot sex,fun read and being stupid while in love isn't a crime but a mean trick by nature to keep us breeding.

I saw your pics I want you,but that bunny has to wait in the car, bring the chain,some water and that lipstick.

You are going to write more even when this set ends .....right????

then i am happy you are with the person you truly deserve.

why?, if some one were to show you genuine care , compassion & love, i have no doubt that you would discard them in a new york minute. you cant seem to have a grasp on reasoning & rational thought. No wonder men feel entitled when they meet such silly girls in the world, i tried to make a previous girlfriend grow a spine & be decisive , but in the end i walked from her when i told her i could no longer be in a relationship with a person who needs to be told every thing. a 20 yr old minor in other words.

There is something desperately wrong in girls like you, its like either you are in a way retarded or developmentally deficient.

you may have heard of stories in the animal kingdom where a parent kills the newborn child after a few days, specially with lions , there is a theory, that suggests that perhaps the reason is that the lion senses a threat not in sexual dominance, but rather difference from the cub, hence he kills it.

shame humans have too much empathy & love compared to lions when it comes to killing a child, not that it does not happen, but in your case it was a lucky miss. By that i mean the abuse in you childhood was not horrific enough. You some how survived.

But now there is hope, either you life is short or you wont be with a person who will actually love you. so that means you wont anybodies heart.

If you feel i am attacking you, then yes i am attacking you, as thats what only makes sense to you.

finally, all said & done, i am happy you are with a person you deserve.

but if in case what i said made you hurt in anyway, then am sorry, also before i go, check the link below its not shortened its just a news story, her only words before she dies are "Get help, Run!".

http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-4038146/I-never-knew-human-evil-Woman-suffered-horrifying-burns-boyfriend-doused-gasoline-set-fire-speaks-hospital-s-spent-SIXTEEN-months.html

And when you said this was a true story of you, it made it more beautiful. A part of me wants to ask if you found the right person to love you and abuse you at the same time, but the other part of me asks did you ever have the heart to leave him?

Would there be a part 3?

We need more of this please