All Comments on 'JD's Bedroom'

Too short and abrupt ending.

Why bother writing it at all?

I think you have the making of a terrific story - but it isn't finished. It is a story that needs to be told. Thank You.

Please stop writing. None of these stories are any good. At all.

Many mothers experience similar desires that often lay dormant as they watch a son bloom. Beautifully expressed through the eyes of a wanton mother.

Nice vignette - but you kind of need the previous story with JD to put it into context.

This is not a story. It is an idea that has no substance. What is the point?

WTF is Genderless from your Bio?