All Comments on 'Jean and Hurricane Eloise'

An incredibly well-written tale, made all the more so by being an actual account of what once was. Thank you!

And a true story, amazing and very erotic. Good job. Next chapter please?

Very well done.

At the end it did get a little too much "touchy-feely" for me. But that's just me and certainly doesn't reflect on your writing ability.

...but what happens next?!?

The ending felt like you got tired or writing this story. Because of that, instead of the originally intended Texas Chainsaw type of story where a girl gets stuck with hillbillies, you gave it a sudden happy ending. Now that you have written several popular non-consensual stories, could you finish this story as you originally intended?

Another piece of art.