All Comments on 'Jeannie's Shopping "Strip" Ch. 02'

by MrFrustration

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I couldn't stop laughing...

But only because I think I know these people. Great characterizations, btw – very real. Long lead-up, but again, it feels real – and makes the payoff worth it. Nice job.

LIVINRFANTASIESLIVINRFANTASIESalmost 7 years ago

Great story. Waiting for the next game.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Alas no part 3!

Please dont leave us hanging!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story with nice surprises. Love exhibitionism and games so I hope the last line is leading to more games. Really liked the characters and pacing. Keep it up, my friend.

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