All Comments on 'Jean's Special Day'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Is he ever going to fuck her for real?

If it takes as long to tell about the whole day as it took you to tell about one instance of phone sex...this could be a book till the story is told. Lots of detail and lots of background. Good writing, but I prefer more down and dirty. I hope the next chapter gets to it more quickly!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
How Romantic

What a welcome departure. I love the really dirty stuff too, however, this gave me twinge where it counts.

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