All Comments on 'Jeffrey's First Lesson'

And stupid within the first paragraph. What is with the new stories today?

First comment summed it up. This is pure piss-ignorance from the start. Can we have a muligan for Nov 25th

you should really stop writing this crap and maybe grow up and stop watching WWE it was stupid story line

sorry kid it won't work with adults

Move off the couch, out of mom's house and get a job. You are not a writer. Grow up and act your age.

Seek professional help.

Words fail me, get the fuck off this site, get a job, and actually meet people. Let me give you a hint, sonny; the 'acting' in porn movies is not even that, it's just window-dressing to give 13 year old nerks like you enough time to get your pencil dick out and into your mitt; it is not real life, it's not even a pale shadow of real life, it's just something to fill up the soundtrack before all the "Oooh, ahhh, my God, you're so big, Honey!" starts.Dream on, grow the fuck up, and join the real world.

can I say that's already been said? IT WAS CRAP AND STUPID!

it was a good beginning but I recommend that you make sure your chapters are at least 2 if not 3 pages long.

maybe the worst and dumbest story I've read on here in a long time.

Like the title says, glad to see you back. Really. But this story doesnt even compete with the first story of yours I read on here. Boy wrestles his aunt gina (I think) it was three chapters and its gone now. Hope you tap into that story. This one felt rushed.

Awesome story!

@haters: if you're not into this stuff, why bother read it???

So is there any chance of us getting to see Jeffery in action against the rival MILF? And how the other family's son fares against Jeffery's mom?

That was intense, but for me it needs a back story, how did Jeff's family get into sexfighting, an why wasn't Jeff into it before his mother walked into his room, to give him a crash course.

Awesome

Don't listen to the haters.... This was a great story.... Although, I would like to see more action between mother and son... Take us through the training of her son.... And after that the actual fight. What you have is great but please expand on it.