All Comments on 'Jenni from Rehab'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Is the dad's name Dougal or Duncan?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Disjointed.

So much so that I did not read it all.

Polly_DollyPolly_Dollyabout 1 year ago

If I’m not mistaken, that was kind of…heartwarming.

Also, from now on, I’ll be referring to my truck bed as a “tray.”

Marklynda2Marklynda22 months ago

Other than the Dougal to Duncan switch and some minor apparent typos, another well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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