All Comments on 'Jennie And Mike And Cathy'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great

Wow. At last a literate story. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
...but

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I know this was a "guy" story, but it still made me wet!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
GREAT

Excellent story! BRAVO

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
DOWN MY LINE

I like girlfriend's daughter stories -- although this is a drastic variation of the type that I generally prefer, which is the girlfriend knowing and/or encouraging. In this story, girlfriend is kinda detached /distant -- which works with the plot.

I also like daughter's friends stories.

So,this tale played into two of my idiosyncrasies.

It also avoided a mild dislike by going only so far as the perineum (the spot between genitals and anus), thus avoiding anal -- something I would be OK never encountering on Literotica. It would be nice if all anal could be left in Anal category. But I realize that a story may include several categories; hence -- since I have read Literotica for so many years-- I've knda gotten used to putting up with anal in non-Anal stories.

I'm glad I did not have to do so in this story.

Add to this, brian473317 has very good language and also storytelling skills.

So: 5 stars for each episode in this series

(including "Jennie," and also "Jennie and Mike").

Also, I consider 10 years the benchmark of longevity for a Literotica writer -- few attain it. Congratulations to brian473317 for surpassing that.

Paul in Oklahoma

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