All Comments on 'Jennie's Awakening'

Nice start, looking forward to reading more. Thank you.

Nice start, but a bit too abrupt. A little more background, and a slower pace would be nice. Like, how did the head cheerleader (presumably a senior) ever meet a freshman and go to her room with sex toys?

I feel like we found out a lot more about Emily than Jennie. That's odd, considering that Jennie is the main character.

Please continue.

I wish the story was longer. I felt it left the reader hanging, hungry for more.