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All Comments on 'Jennifer's Day Off'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Wish I could buy this creep for what I think______

_____he's wort and sell him for what he thinks he's worth.

I'd make a fortune

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Needs re-thinking...

The writing itself was okay, but there is a jarring shift from past to present tense. I thought I had zoned out and started reading another story.

Needs another pass through the word processor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Slow to a Boil Over! But when she does does ......

It took a little while to get into this story because of the authors writing style and tense changes. However, once you figured out what he was trying to say, " Boy did this story get HOT!""

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